关于2025新课标一卷听力和续写的思考

赵凤军

今天，认真听了一遍2025高考的听力题，根据材料和题目总结如下：

第一：听力考查的能力更加全面。你的耳朵、脑子还有手都得用上才行。平时训练有素，才能临危不乱。

比如第一题，你需要弄懂材料“Could you put down（写下） your information in this form?”中的put down指的是“write down”；还需要知道选项中“fill out the form”就是你平时背诵的“fill in the form”。

第二：听前预习非常重要，绝不是可用可无的。尤其是预习中发现关于“时间”“金钱”“数字”“人名、地名”的题目时，你就要提醒自己，这一段要边听边记，因为高考题的特点告诉你，这种题目是要通过计算才能得出来的，你要把你听到的信息进行加工整理。

比如第7题和第9题

7.What time does school finish on Wednesdays?

A.At 2:00 p.m. B. At 2:30 p.m. C. At 3:30 p.m.

9. Who will Grace have dinner with?

A. Fiona. B. Jennifer. C. David.

前者材料里面有好几个时间点，后者材料里面有好几个人名，稍不注意，前功尽弃。所以，听前预习做得好，相当于别人听两遍，你听了三遍，优势不言而喻。

第三：熟能生巧。平时整理的东西不能停留在会的阶段，必须达到熟练的地步。当它出现在听力试题中的时候，你的脑子要迅速反应出该单词在这里的准确含义，为最后梳理争取宝贵时间。

第10段材料中，就有三个“多义词”，需要在听的过程中加以分辨。

比如：word指的是“消息”，spread the word就是“传播消息”，而不是“传播词汇”。

“foot”指的是“英尺”，而不是“脚”；

“address”是“解决处理”，而不是“地址”

怎么样，未来的高考生，知道今后学习的重点是什么了吧？

对于这个续写，我认为质量还是很好的。尤其是续写的这两段给出的首句，体现出了高考的选拔性。如果高三学生，对于两段首句中的“fault”和“biscuit”都不认识，他就应该被淘汰掉。

看一下我手中的续写样板：

I realized it was me who was at fault. I had been so focused on protecting the kids that I hadn't considered my brother's feelings. Toby wasn't just a pet; he was his companion through tough times. My brother had been struggling with health issues, and losing his wife had left him lonely. Toby was the one who kept him company and gave him comfort. I had been selfish and insensitive, and I knew I needed to make things right. I decided to visit him and bring something to show my sincerity.

With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. When he opened it, I could see the hurt in his eyes. It was clear that my actions had upset him deeply. "I'm really sorry about the other day," I said, holding out the biscuits, "I realize now how important Toby is to you. How about bringing Toby over this weekend? We'll make sure he's safe and welcome." Looking at the biscuits and then back at me, my brother smiled and said. "Thanks. Alright, I'd like that." With Toby by our side, our relationship was mended, and I knew our bond as brothers was stronger than any misunderstanding.

我对这篇续写有些意见。凭直觉，这绝不是原文的结尾，应该是续貂的“狗尾”。为什么这么说呢？

第一，你看第一段的内容，这几乎就是完全在重复原文最后一段的内容嘛！这一段应该可以描写自己的后悔，同时用虚拟语气来表达出这完全是一个可以避免的错误，或者列举一些正确做法。最后点出自己要亲自去跟哥哥道歉。

第二，我感觉原文作者最后的伴手礼“biscuit”应该是一个伏笔。他既是向哥哥道歉，也是向Toby道歉。因为兄弟俩的矛盾就是从作者在雨天不想让Toby进屋造成的。想得到哥哥的谅解，必须先端正对Toby的看法。作者只有不把Toby当成狗，而打心底里当成是哥哥的一个密友伙伴，哥哥才会谅解他。而“biscuit”恰恰是既能哄人又能哄宠物的一类食物。当你和狗狗一起分享饼干的时刻，就是表明你真正接纳了它的时刻。